The
holidays are past and most of us are back at the day job. But writing is still what oils the cogs and
wheels of daily life at our house. Around
Halloween, I wrote a story for the Creative Frighting contest sponsored by our publisher,
Jolly Fish Press. Both Andy
and I had fun writing Halloween stories and he has already posted his. (Scroll down the blogs to see "Trona Honeymoon.")
But
I never got a chance to post my story. Somehow,
it didn't seem appropriate during the Christmas holidays. So now that dreary
weather is upon us, we'll put the candles back in the jack-o-lantern. Hope you enjoy.
Millie
Sighing
contentedly, Millie slowly closed her book.
She had feared the story wouldn’t end right. She hated stories that didn’t know how to end,
but this ending was perfect. Relishing
the moment, she sat immersed in the book’s final, triumphant scenes when a
sudden unfamiliar noise jolted her from her reverie. Disoriented, she stared up into a room
engulfed in nighttime blackness. Except
for a crisp circle of light on her lap, everything else was hidden by darkness.
Her aging eyes didn’t see well
in the dark any more. Her husband, Gregory,
had gotten tired of watching her squint when she tried to read in the old
house’s dim lighting. “Your face is all
puckered up like a prune, trying to read that page,” he’d complained. Last Christmas, he had presented her with a
bright, battery-powered clip light that she could take with her anywhere around
the house. Right now it dangled from a
hook on the wall above her, encasing her in a narrow shaft of light.
She sank back into the softness
of her over-stuffed chair and closed her eyes, feeling suddenly weary. The waning autumn sun had gone down unnoticed
while she read, and the big, creaky house still needed to be shut up for the
night.
When Gregory
was out of town on business, Millie was careful to close windows and lock doors
before the sun went down, but this evening she had been distracted. She wasn’t scared to be alone, but the
neighborhood had changed in the last few years, as old friends moved to warmer
climes or smaller homes, and the newcomers were not as neighborly. Millie had suggested to Gregory that they
move to a newer, smaller house, but he wouldn’t hear of it.
Irritated,
Millie sniffed and immediately crinkled her nose at the unpleasant scent. The old house always had a musty, dead smell,
so on warmer days, she liked to throw open the windows to collect as much fresh
air as possible. With the cooler fall
weather, she now opened only the downstairs windows. It had been weeks since she had last unlocked
and opened any of the upstairs windows.
Rising stiffly from her chair,
Millie reached for the clip light behind her, but her hand brushed it off the
hook before she could grasp it. With a loud
crash, it smashed into the hard-wood floor, shattering the bulb and sending
broken glass tinkling across the floor in all directions. Everything was suddenly enveloped in the inky
blackness of the night.
Millie stood still, her bare
feet frozen in place. With broken glass
all around, she dared not take a step until her eyes adjusted to the darkness. The dark shapes of the larger pieces of
furniture began to appear, but strain as she might, she could not make out the
tiny glass shards she knew were scattered around her.
Millie’s locked knees began to
complain, making her fear they might buckle.
Swishing out her breath in frustration, she was about to take her
chances in the dark, when she was startled by that strange, unfamiliar noise
again--like someone whispering far away, saying something she couldn’t quite
understand.
Alarmed, she took a quick step
forward, and immediately, a sharp pain flashed in the heel of her right foot. The glass shards! But, fearing the strange noise more, she kept
moving. On tip-toe, protecting her
injured heel, she groped towards the backdoor, where she knew a light switch
waited in the dark. Miraculously, she
did not step on any more broken glass.
When her hand finally touched
the wall, she paused to listen, but all was silent. Taking a shuddering breath, she followed the
wall until she found the door, and then the light switch beside it. She flipped the switch up. Nothing happened. All was still dark. Frantically, she flipped it again, repeatedly. Still nothing.
Millie tried to calm her rising
panic. Staring out the window in the
backdoor, she wondered why someone would shut off the power to her house. Suddenly, she realized that not just her
house was dark. She could see several
houses to each side of her backyard as well as many of the houses across the
street from these back-door houses. All
were black. She could not see a single
light in any of these homes that were normally filled with warm, living lights.
Relief flowed through
Millie. No wonder her light switch
didn’t work. The power in her
neighborhood must have gone out while she was reading. She smiled, able to laugh at herself a
little. The power outage was strange, since
there had been no storms for days, but now there was a logical reason, rather
than a diabolical reason, for why her lights didn’t work.
Suddenly, as if carried upon a
wisp of wind, that distant, unfamiliar noise came again. Like a breathy whisper, the sound came
together as a single word, “Millie.”
Sure that the sound had come
from outside, from somewhere in the backyard, she called through the door,
“Who’s there? What do you want?” She was answered only by silence.
Millie struggled to calm her
breathing. It’s just my imagination, she thought. I’m the only one here. I need to get a flashlight and get all the
downstairs windows and doors closed and locked.
And get that piece of glass out of my heel!
Gregory always kept a
flashlight in the kitchen tool drawer, and Millie wanted that flashlight. After making sure the back door was securely
locked, she felt along the wall until she reached the large den window. Everything outside was quiet and dark. The breeze coming in through the big open
window was cold, icy cold.
Suddenly,
Millie remembered that the weather forecast in the morning newspaper had said
there was a chance of frost tonight, and she was immediately angry with herself--she
should have shut all the windows hours ago.
The house was going to be freezing cold all night if she didn’t get all
the windows shut up now as fast as possible.
The den window did not slide
smoothly, so she had to use both hands, one near the top and one near the
bottom, to get it closed. Tugging hard
to close the final inches, she distinctly heard that breathy whisper again,
“Millie.”
Someone
is out there calling my name!
Frantically, she pulled the
window shut, and with shaky hands, slammed down the metal latch. For long moments, she sagged against the wall,
struggling to slow her ragged breath before peeking out through the window again. Nothing moved in the darkness, but it was
hard to tell. It was so very dark. There wasn’t even any moonlight.
It
wasn’t my imagination, Millie thought stubbornly. Someone is out there calling my
name! Whoever it is can’t see in the dark any better than I can, but I know
where the phone is, and I’m calling for help right now.
The kitchen phone hung on the
wall between the kitchen and the den. Feeling
her way into the kitchen on tip toe, she stopped when her fingers gently
touched the phone. Carefully, she lifted
the phone from its cradle and held it to her ear. There was no dial tone--the phone was dead. She jabbed at the flash button several
times--still no tone. Now, this was not
logical. Even when the power went out,
the phone still worked.
For a moment, she felt an
insane urge to rip the phone out of the wall and throw it.
Okay, she
thought, as she slowed her breathing again,
calm down. This isn’t going to help. I don’t know why this phone is dead, but my
cell is upstairs in my bedroom. I still
need to lock up the downstairs. Once
everything is safely locked up, I’ll go upstairs and call for help.
With renewed hope, Millie felt
her way quietly over to the window above the kitchen sink. She stopped at the window to listen, then
reached up to slide it closed, but even before she touched the window sill, a
low, deep voice whispered through the window, “Millie.”
For a moment, her heart
stopped. Biting back a scream, she slid
the window closed and locked it before backing away from the sink. In her panic, she put her full weight on her
right heel, and crumpled instantly to the floor, gasping in pain.
For a long time, she lay
huddled on the floor eyeing the kitchen window, expecting to see a black figure
peering through it. When nothing
happened, she sat up with a sense of urgency and dragged herself over to the
tool drawer. Getting up on her knees,
she pulled open the drawer and fished around inside until she felt the
flashlight. Dropping back on the floor,
she covered the end of the flashlight with one hand, so the light couldn’t be
seen from the outside and pushed the thumb switch up. To her dismay, the switch wouldn’t go up, but
it would go down.
The flashlight had been turned
on already. It had been sitting in the drawer;
turned on for who knows how long and now the batteries were completely dead. If Gregory had more batteries for this flashlight,
Millie didn’t know where. Why was he
always gone so much?
For a moment, Millie thought
she might cry in pure frustration when she had a sudden flash of
inspiration. Sliding over to another
drawer, she fished around until she found a box of birthday candles and a pack
of matches. In yet another drawer, she
fished out a box of band aids.
Crawling over to the broom
closet, she squeezed in and shut the door.
First pushing some cleaning rags under the door to make sure no light
leaked out, she struck a match. Glorious
light burst forth. She almost sobbed. With trembling hands, she lit a candle and
inspected her foot. What a bloody mess
it was, and still bleeding. She must
have been tracking blood through the house wherever she went, but the wound was
not wide and she could see the end of the piece of glass poking out. Carefully, she pulled the glass out of the
wound and covered the cut with several large, thick band aids.
Millie was tempted to stay
hidden in the closet until the sun came up, but she knew she would be safer if
she got the rest of the house locked up, so she blew out her candle and slowly
pushed the closet door open. Everything
was still pitch black. After listening
carefully for a few moments to silence, she pulled herself to her feet and felt
her way gingerly out of the kitchen and into the dining room. She still avoided putting her full weight on
her right heel, but now she could walk more normally with only slight pain.
Once the dining room door was
locked, she inched up to the edge of the dining room window. She dreaded standing out in front of the
window, but didn’t know any other way, with her small frame, to get enough
leverage to push the window closed. Taking
a deep breath, she stepped out, grabbed the window frame with both hands and
threw her weight into it. Before it could
shut completely, the deep moaning voice whispered, “Millie.” It sounded so close!
Stop! she
wanted to yell. Stop saying my name! Who are you? How do you know my name? She was sure now that the voice of her
tormentor was the voice of a man, but not a voice she could recognize, and he
was somehow watching her in the darkness make her rounds as she shut up her
house.
Watch
on,
she thought. I’m almost done, and I’ll get my cell phone and help will come.
She felt bruised and sore, in both
body and soul, but she could move more quickly now with no glass in her heel. Feeling her way into the front room, she
could see faint starlight shining through the open window. She was sure her tormentor would be watching
for her, but she did not hesitate. She
grabbed the window and began pushing it closed.
Immediately, a voice from out of nowhere, but seemingly close by,
whispered, “Millie!”
No matter how much she thought
she was ready for that voice, the whisper still twisted her insides each time
she heard it, and yet, in some weird way, its tones were beginning to sound almost
familiar. Feeling as if she were nearing
the end of a marathon, she limped carefully over to the front door and locked
it securely. Shaking all over, she
backed away from the door, across the large entry hall and leaned against the
banister at the bottom of the stairs, feeling totally drained, but relieved. The house was all locked up. She was finally safe.
She had
done it. In spite of the darkness and
wounds, she had done it. Her tormentor
was locked out. In a minute she would call
the police, and they would be here, here at her house, and it would be her
tormentor who would be looking for a safe place to hide. She smiled grimly. She hoped the police would be as merciless
with him as he had been with her.
Standing at the bottom of the
stairs, catching her breath, Millie began shaking uncontrollably. She realized she wasn’t shaking because she
was scared--she was cold, really cold. A
draft of freezing air, was sliding down the stairs, blowing its icy breath down
her back.
But, there
should be no draft. None of the upstairs
windows are open!
Millie turned to look up the
stairs and could feel the cold wind blowing in her face, but her eyes could see
nothing. Everything was still pitch
black. Then, she thought she heard
something. With every fiber of her body,
she listened, and suddenly, a board in the landing at the top of the stairs creaked. That board had creaked as long as Millie
could remember. It always creaked when
someone stepped on it.
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